Her pink jacquard clutch:
Kohls and powders she applies
In the bus window.
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Well this certainly sent me scrambling to the dictionary! A vivid snapshot, or even snapshots, depending on one's interpretation of the wonderful last line....I think this ranks with dusty brown. Lilting. Gorgeous.
Posted by: mike | November 09, 2012 at 03:29 PM
Thanks, Mike! I wasn't sure about this one after writing it in my head on the bus last night. I simplified it a lot further this morning and changed the second line to something specific rather than the original and boring "the eye makeup she applied" - and also moved the tense from past to present. Those changes made a big difference. Glad you liked it.
Posted by: Beth | November 09, 2012 at 04:10 PM